Just a thought, but you didn't have to make your crying THAT long. Of course I do understand the reference (Mallow bring on the rain!). I do understand, but I had to scroll a bit too long for that one. (Still nice job capturing Mallow in your post.
Xbrav...I love this remix to death. Not only is it very original (while still keeping respect to the game itself), but it also has a great score for each different melody in the song.
Let's start with part one: Sadness. It actually is very sorrowful in the game and your remix enhances that at 30 seconds all the while not making it overpowering the moment.
I love the transition into Tadpole Pond. It starts out simple then goes into a full beat which kinda reminds me of some Jamaican Music (if a Jamaican reads this and is offended, I apologize, I've only heard a few songs from your country and I loved them).
I love the next transition as well, and it makes Nimbus Land sound like a Royal Parade (fitting given who Mallow really is). This is done without drawing away from the song.
I love one more thing, how the song symbolizes Mallow's life. First sadness (being lost away from his family and coming down the falls to Tadpole Pond (hence sorrow then Tadpole Pond). Then Nimbus Land is him finding his home and finding his true heritage and Tadpole Pond is him still visiting his grandpa who raised him.
Extremely well done!