I like the the panning here. nice. The part in the middle with the cool sounding delayed synth was pretty neat as well. Maybe a bass part somewhere and a hi-hat to keep a steady beat? Hope this helps... Keep it up.
Better, but short.
The only real problem is that the bass is overriding absolutely everything. Its like your listening to a song, then someone accidentally bumps your 'woofer to max, and you go deaf for a while lol. Nice try again, keep going ^^.
It has its good points, it has its bad points.
A mediocre track, at times the audio seems...garbled? rough? i can't find an adjective to correctly describe it. The same sounds are repeated too often, however the general flow of the song is great. As previously stated with Metropolis, the song needs more duration to allow room for more customization (slowly adding more effects, transitions, etc).