Try to stay away from low quality sounds like at 0:22 . I would have preferred if you carried that melody at the start and build lairs around it .
I understand what you are saying and I thank you for your input. I didn't want to keep the same melody throughout the entire song because I tried doing that for one of my other songs (one that I removed from Newgrounds) and it was terrible. Thank you for spending time to post a review to my song. It really helps me a lot. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.