Wow this distortion is awful too
I don't know what distortions you use, but in my opinion they are too gritty and overdone, kinda takes the sound out of the whole piece. Besides that, the drums were a bit weak for a Metallicaish song, the guitar was pretty cool. If you worked on a rhythm part and a solo, this would be a killer song.
3/5
Brianator 
Napt 
