I think this awesome. The reason for 4.5 stars is because I think it could use some lyrics. It sounds to me like Tool, Opeth, and maybe Mastodon had a baby, and this was it. This song is perfect for progressive metal. For the vocals I would get someone who can sing like Myles Kennedy from Slash and Alter Bridge, but that's my thought. As I said this is perfect for progressive metal. I see a career in your future.
Solid recording technique, I can hear the elements you noted in 'stuff'. It's not reinventing the wheel, but head shoulders above other attempts at cross-genre. Latter half of the track is my personal fav.
Gotta agree with Dan on this one, there's too much electronic stuff, without any guitars or heavy riffs to drive the music in some parts, and the riffs themselves just sound like generic Djent riffs. Sounds cool, but not very original.
2:37 is one of the heaviest passages I've heard in recent memory. This is outstanding.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.