nice for first try but is not my music!
Little too repetitive, otherwise really addictive!
Its really great mate^^ good work
Not bat at all for your first song. The melody is pretty nice in itself, could be a little quieter as it is quite overpowering. The 2 things i really did not like were the short vocal and that laser sound effect, they did not fit at all. Apart from that keep practicing!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.