Okay so I don't fully want to give this a 5, and truly I wanted to rate it a 4, but this song works well enough in your writing that I like it.
But dude your mixing is bad. To really hit top notch you've gotta fix the overly loud mixing. I think your songs may sound way better just from turning down everything A LOT.
While you get a cool ambient sound from the pad strings, the lead violin sounds like garbage. It's too loud and mixed really high to where its almost painful.
The piano is also not very convicing to me, it needs more reverb or something to make the fakeness of the samples less prevalent.
I gave this song a 5/4 soley because I like your writing, it's very good. I enjoy the chords and melodies very much.
But the mixing is really bad, very very bad. If you don't get that fixed it could really overshadow how good your writing is like it almost did here.
You should check out my friend who is also on bandcamp named Taylor Mefford. If you search him and listen to his album "An Experiment with an Air Pump", you can listen to a really well mixed classical album composed entirely of free instruments from the internet.
Keep making music dude!
I'll try to see what I can do about the mixing. Sometimes it's hard because I don't know what it's going to sound like on other people's speakers since not everyone has the same setup as me so I'm still trying to figure out how to get it right. I can turn down the violin easily so I'll probably change that.
Thank you for you input though, I really appreciated it.
Update: I tried tweaking it a bit and have uploaded a new version
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.