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Mr. Funk Goes to Town WIP

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Mr. Funk Goes to Town WIP

Yo I need some help with finishing this track here. Any feedback welcome!

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help with finishing the track:

vocals, some damsy delicate thing singing soft nothings over top. mr funk needs a girl to be serenading the listener. he's going to town to get her some flowers.

"all these days I have been screaming, crying, kicking, I feel like I am dying, oh baby, you are so shady, Mr Funk why can't you play the game fair-lee, you're such a party stopper but you don't holler mr funk you soon will be a gonner"

lyrics something like that.

intro the beat longer, the beat itself is fine enough, and you kick in a chorus too quickly.

A really long piano solo near the end, accentuated over the beat as opposed to layered underneath.

maybe a solid synth to break everything up. something that goes underneath everything.

#ideas



Excellent.
What's up, why aren't you uploading anymore? I've been enjoying your work for 2 years now.If you're reading this please keep up with good work.I think your tracks are amazing!


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Smokazzi
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Uploaded
May 25, 2014
12:39 PM EDT
Genre
Fusion
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3.3 MB
1 min 48 sec
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