help with finishing the track:
vocals, some damsy delicate thing singing soft nothings over top. mr funk needs a girl to be serenading the listener. he's going to town to get her some flowers.
"all these days I have been screaming, crying, kicking, I feel like I am dying, oh baby, you are so shady, Mr Funk why can't you play the game fair-lee, you're such a party stopper but you don't holler mr funk you soon will be a gonner"
lyrics something like that.
intro the beat longer, the beat itself is fine enough, and you kick in a chorus too quickly.
A really long piano solo near the end, accentuated over the beat as opposed to layered underneath.
maybe a solid synth to break everything up. something that goes underneath everything.