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Dansu No Hana

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Hi Guyz :D.
So I promised my fans to upload a track if i get 30 fans this week, and I currently have 35 fans so guess I gotta upload something XD. I made this track a long time ago for a collab, but I haven't heard from the other guy in a while so I'll just upload this instrumental ;).

Hope you enjoy it :D. Please rate and review ;)

Ps. This is inspired by CivicYT

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Pretty laid back and happy, from what I can tell. Some chromatic non-harmonic tones going on, same melody throughout, and it's relatively cohesive. My only complaint is that the piano synth sounds... too synth-y? Maybe it's just not my taste. Anyway, I liked it. Nice job!

Pardon the music theory jargon by the way; I'm a music theory major, so analyzing music is practically automatic, aha. You might want to check out some typical composing conventions for smoother voice leading (of course, rules are meant to be broken) and chord progression for future works. They can improve your writing ability tremendously.

Anyway, good listen. I enjoyed it. :)

Yeah this is fun! - like you said, it's just the instrumental, but i really like where it's going so far! Has a really happy mood to it.

Ectisity responds:

Glad you liked it :D!

Listening to this was enjoyable while browsing the net. The mix overall sounds very clean and smooth. The start sounded weird for me for some reason. I think its that sustained synth in the background that sounds funny to me. Eh, idk, Not much of I problem though. You did well with keeping up the variety, so it didn't get boring. The side chaining sounds very good at the part around 1:00. That's something I haven't got to sound that well yet. Hm. I'm not too much of a fan of the arrangement overall though. Just not melodies that I found too engaging for whatever reason. The piano parts are great though.

This is a good song, just not exactly my cup of tea.

Ectisity responds:

Thx for the review :D. Glad you enjoyed. Yea the melodies where kinda random and not really thought through. Might polish this up a bit in the future ;).

Nice i've been waiting for your 30 fans submision for some time now :D

Ectisity responds:

:D! Thx for being an awesome fan ;). you guyz encourage me to keep making music :D.
Look out for my 40 fans submission. Might come soon if you guyz keep multiplying like you've been lately XD.

The song is really repetitive, each part doesn't transition very well into the next, the mixing sounds messy, and some instruments are too loud while others are barely audible.

You have a lot of work to do on this song, but there are some positive things I should say.

You did a great job in choosing your instruments and they fit the song's mood perfectly! The rising synth sounds really cool, and the white noise makes some transitions sound smoother.

I think it would be a good idea to go back into this project and spend a few hours on just editing the mixing, and then resubmit it to newgrounds.

Ectisity responds:

Thx for the honest review :). Yea this has alot of flaws. Was made before I actually learned how to properly mix a track. As for the lack of variety, it's because it was meant as an instrumental X3.
I might go back and polish up this project in the future ;).

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Uploaded
May 24, 2014
2:35 PM EDT
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House
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7.7 MB
3 min 23 sec
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