Man I keep bumping into those pesky tracks made by artists who are better than me and I can't offer much advice.
Your composition is fantastic, it's not unique but you obviously know how to write and all the synths and such really flow together beautifully. It ends up being a nice calm track.
Maybe if I were to offer advice I'd say the song doesn't have much risk to it (except for using the default FL snare), it's like it follows a pretty regular pattern and sounds nice, but never does any WOW type stuff. You rise and fall as expected and everyone goes home feeling great because its exactly what they wanted cause its what they've heard before.
You have a lot of skill and it'd be cool to here you add something new, add some flash, add something that's totally unique to yourself. A lot of my favorite artists take a few risks and do something out of the mold, like Madeon and his super upbeat writing and in your face mixing, and Andrew Aversa and his mixture of real and unreal instruments. You have a lot of talent and with something more you might ending being some of people's favorites.
Honestly, I didn't spend all that much time working on this track. :p I mean, I did want to add some "WOW" to it when I started, but as it went on I found myself adding less and less to the track. I probably should've waited a few days and waiting for a second burst of inspiration to hit before uploading the track. Maybe i'll work my way back to it. :p
Also, I like you. I'm going to hit you up with a message. I'm also going to be following you from here on as well as listening to your work.