Now I really can't tell if you have a lot of music competence but you have a very specific style, or you have a crutch like i do and your style is really just you not being able to make other styles you're happy with.
I want to start off with something good though, I do like the glitchiness and the use of the distortion effects around the 2nd minute, and I like when the Bass actually starts playing chords rather than...
Okay truth be told most of this song actually gave me head pains. See its weird I've heard songs in this dark techno style, and actually listen to them regularly, but I don't think you know enough about music writing to make it interesting throughout.
I tried for like 15 minutes to find this techno song that had vampires in it, but I can't. It was a really dark techno song with a lot of distortion that raped your ears but it was really good and I would listen to it all the time on school trips. So instead of that here's a similar collection of songs with a similar style. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CYkGj5MmT3Y
But if you can incorporate more music theory knowledge into your songs you could make them SO GOOD. I like the style you have, but it needs more than just one chord the whole time. It gets mundane quickly and also makes your head hurt lol. Maybe that was intentional I don't know.
Keep making music dude!
their is a few chords at the start yes but this was an experimental tune kinda mash up style more about just beats . if you check some of my other stuff you will see its random styles not normally ever the same.
BTW i dont think your aloud to post Youtube links on here
thanks for listening
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