I can here the vocals much better on this version. The mix is still really good. The only criticism I would have is that your voice needs some improvement. It might be the style you are going for too... I know that Trent Reznor used to sing very ... how do I explain it? kind of whiny. I think he pulled it off, I think you need more work at it. I not saying that your voice sounds bad, I like your tone. You just need more control over it, more projection, and maybe a little work on pitch. Otherwise, I loved the song. It is really a great beginning to something very epic.
I appreciate the encouragement, vocals are much harder than most people realize! :) Thanks for the review man!
Not a fan of the vocals. However, instrumentally, the song is pretty impressive. Crisp, clean, dark, and it has a steady drive. Not bad!
Appreciated! Thanks for your thoughts! :)
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