I think the intro may be to long and maybe you could have mastered the whole track a little bit, and dude serious for the whole song there is no break down for dub. I know there Is too much judgement but check out my song and judge then :D
thanks, I saw your comment just now. and yeah you're exactly right, but now I went kinda better, and your musics are still awesome!
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