Ehh, it was alright
I got the feeling that you were going for a dark creepy/scary feeling. DUR right? Well I didn't really get that from this song. What was up with the ending sample "Your ready to face the future"? It just felt like a crap way to end the song and it didn't really fit in. Maybe it's just me, but I was not impressed at all.
Overall, the song is kind of boring and even though it is only 2 minutes long, it feels like it drags. My suggestion is to cut it down to 20 seconds and try to make a cool loop out of it. Then re-submit that.