This is pretty good! The drums are very heavy, but it seems to work alright. The song doesnt initially grab me, but after a few plays through it I got to learn the melody/chords making the song sound better. Considering the song is a videogame genre to be played over and over, its pretty good in that respect!
The only thing I'd say to improve on would be adding a few other parts. Dont be afraid to drop out the bass for a bridge/middle 8 section, I think this song could have done with that.
The other thing would be some of the VSTs sound a bit odd. I think thats the Harmor SpacePluck preset as the guitar, could be wrong, but I dont really think it fits. Something more piano-like would have been better in my opinion. I do really like the orchestral parts at 35secs ish though!
But yeah, pretty strong song for a video game. Keep up the good work!