Hi BO. I really like the instruments, especially the piano at the beginning. The beat is very danceable, yet the piano parts really instilled a sort of tranquil mood in a way. I thought it started getting a little repetitive after around 1:38 or so. I appreciate the variations on it at around 2:40, but I still think you could've done a bit more there. Overall, though, I really like the structure and transitions and atmosphere and everything. The ending is kind of abrupt, but I think you already acknowledged that you weren't able to fix everything you wanted to before your computer started having problems, so I'll let it slide. ;) Keep up the good work, BlueOceans! :D
Pretty typical chords. Cool ones at that. It had a nice vibe to start. I liked that synth melody at 1:00. It progressed pretty decently, and I like how you returned to the intro vibe with that soft pluck, and then brought the main synth back in to tie it all together.
All this to say, the song was really well organized, and pretty solid rhythm choice too.
Thankyou for the review!
I like this song, as I liked the preview :P
It's a shame that you had to go through such an annoying issue though :/
All DAWs seem to demand too much processing power -_-
Most of the elements in the song still sound great. Personally though, I'm not really fond of the ending. It sounds more like a breakdown which is soon about to burst into yet another part to me, so I didn't even expect the song to end where it did :)
Also, I feel this track might be slightly too repetitive; there's only really one main melody, even if there are some variations.
Overall: Good job!
" I'm not really fond of the ending. It sounds more like a breakdown which is soon about to burst into yet another part to me, so I didn't even expect the song to end where it did :)"
I disagree, it sounds very conclusive to me. I even added an extra high note to the chord at the end, and the song ends on a satisfying note.
"Also, I feel this track might be slightly too repetitive; there's only really one main melody, even if there are some variations."
I usually use more than one main melody in my songs, but I didn't feel that it was necessary this time. I thought this song's main melody is good enough to be the only melody. I did not think that this song is repetitive, so thankyou for making me aware of this problem! :D
Thanks for the review.
it's really cool. good choice for your instrument and the mixing is to excellent. I've the same problem with my song "Smoke". that every time i press play my CPU goes to 100%. fl studio really drone to much CPU power. so i did like what you did. i had to render it then listen to it and know where the problem and then edit it.
it's very annoying process indeed. but what we can do? this is what makes us creative! the Insist!
4/5 instruments (the lead i didn't like it but your atmosphere is really good :) )
i like your songs! keep that up
Thankyou for the review! The mixing does have problems though. The bass could have been better. And the crash is too loud sometimes.
It sounds cool
Thankyou! but why did you choose to rate this song 3 stars?
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