I'm rating this for what it is, an unfinished idea. This is why you get 4 stars and not two.
I like the dissonance in the chord at 00:43.
It sounds like a nice idea and your voice is pretty spiffy, but what's with the insane amount of white noise that starts at the beginning and ends at 00:23? Are you trying to do some sort of weird noise-punk deal?
That's actually the result of overdubbing three tracks with my bad microphone, but I felt it fit in with the lo-fi aesthetic well enough. Thanks for the feedback.