I'm flattered that you liked my track seven circles, but you really should have asked before you completely ripped it off. or at least listed my as inspiration for the track. its a pretty irregular chord progression, this can't have been an accident.
Lol what? Mate, this song was inspired by lounge music in general, it's what I talked to you about in PMs. You inspired me on finding a rhodes/wurlitzer VST, because I hadn't taken the initiative to find one before. This is a very average progression and I have a couple of unfinished (trash) songs that sound annoyingly similar.
Anyway, just had a listen at seven circles and it is totally the same exact same friggan chords. I did not consciously 'rip you off', but our songs do sound different in the end.
The background track is pretty good and relaxing, and the lyrics are okay, but the singing is a bit too quiet and whispery for my tastes. The ending also as good as the rest of the song. With the guitar outro, it starts getting into this really weird harmonic stuff, which I like, and then seems to abruptly end on the tonic key, which just doesn't feel right.
The ending is the way it is so it can easily transition to another song.
Thank you for your review!
The lyrics are interesting and the music is okay, but they don't fit together. They both sound like they would be good for their own things, but not together. If you were to choose to keep one thing, keep the lyrics and scrap the music. Sorry, but the music does not fit this at all. Try going for something more soft rock inspired. Electric does not fit this. Sorry.
Your advice defies the point of the song.
What do you think I am? Coldplay? Snow Patrol? :P