Very nice
This was different yet i feel like i have heard this one has a nice mix about it and is on a whole other level here so really nice work i like it
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a remix of my song "omni world"
Groovy!
Omni world? Is that some level from one of the legendary Mario games or something? I have no clue, but I do know that this is a nice track. Good beat, good effects, good evreything else. Keep up the good work!
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Good
Dont worry bout what blackplastic said, I remix my own songs all the time. Its fun and helps you improve as a songwriter. The production and sounds in this song were all good but what needed work was the arrangement. I find that starting a song off with the bass just by itself rarely works. If you are going to do an intro like that I would suggest starting higher up in the harmonic range such as a midrange sound. A bass usually wont grab someone's attention unless it is supporting a melody. So ya, thats my two cents. Hope I could help.
zerofalse responds:
hey man, thanx. im glad i remixed this song and made it sound better.but still, i could always improve.. there's not such thing as perfection in my opnion. about that bass.. yeah in the back on my mind i was thinking about the into and how i could possibly make it better. im glad you pointed it out because now i can see those little imperfections about my music. thanx for the review! and advice =)
Ahh... much better.
You have much better drum works in this piece compared to the first one. Good job on the whole percussion aspect.
As mentionned before, this song could use a bit more melodies and diversity. I really thought that the remix would be something completely different though. Like upbeat crazy stuff or something.
I guess you wanted a better version of this song here. Why wouldn't you, i mean it's a good song and a better version wouldn't hurt anyone :D
Good job on this song, keep up the good work!
zerofalse responds:
thanx man. yeah, i wanted to improve on this song eventually. there were these little imperfections so to speak about the first one that made me cringe when i heard it and i was thinking "i gotta change this" lol. anyway thx for the reveiw man. ill still work on mastering my music, and makeing it a little longer and stuff =)
Just a remix
Well it was good but dont you think it was kinda ripping off your own song. Well anyway it wasnt that great of a song because it didnt have that much of a body and it was very short. I still dont see why you would remix your own song.
zerofalse responds:
ow.. kinda harsh man. i thought it was alright.. the reason i remixed my own song was cause i got alot of possitive feed back on the first one, but there were little parts of the song people suggested that i should change. and i did. as you can see. i made a remix, trying to eliminate most of the bad quilities in my original version. im just trying to give the people what they want. sorry if you didnt like the song.
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