Omni world? Is that some level from one of the legendary Mario games or something? I have no clue, but I do know that this is a nice track. Good beat, good effects, good evreything else. Keep up the good work!
Dont worry bout what blackplastic said, I remix my own songs all the time. Its fun and helps you improve as a songwriter. The production and sounds in this song were all good but what needed work was the arrangement. I find that starting a song off with the bass just by itself rarely works. If you are going to do an intro like that I would suggest starting higher up in the harmonic range such as a midrange sound. A bass usually wont grab someone's attention unless it is supporting a melody. So ya, thats my two cents. Hope I could help.
hey man, thanx. im glad i remixed this song and made it sound better.but still, i could always improve.. there's not such thing as perfection in my opnion. about that bass.. yeah in the back on my mind i was thinking about the into and how i could possibly make it better. im glad you pointed it out because now i can see those little imperfections about my music. thanx for the review! and advice =)
Ahh... much better.
You have much better drum works in this piece compared to the first one. Good job on the whole percussion aspect.
As mentionned before, this song could use a bit more melodies and diversity. I really thought that the remix would be something completely different though. Like upbeat crazy stuff or something.
I guess you wanted a better version of this song here. Why wouldn't you, i mean it's a good song and a better version wouldn't hurt anyone :D
Good job on this song, keep up the good work!
thanx man. yeah, i wanted to improve on this song eventually. there were these little imperfections so to speak about the first one that made me cringe when i heard it and i was thinking "i gotta change this" lol. anyway thx for the reveiw man. ill still work on mastering my music, and makeing it a little longer and stuff =)
Just a remix
Well it was good but dont you think it was kinda ripping off your own song. Well anyway it wasnt that great of a song because it didnt have that much of a body and it was very short. I still dont see why you would remix your own song.
ow.. kinda harsh man. i thought it was alright.. the reason i remixed my own song was cause i got alot of possitive feed back on the first one, but there were little parts of the song people suggested that i should change. and i did. as you can see. i made a remix, trying to eliminate most of the bad quilities in my original version. im just trying to give the people what they want. sorry if you didnt like the song.
The mastering was great and the instruments you created sounded good, but I noticed that the diversity in the song is somewhat minimal... some supplementary melodies or sounds would really add to the quality of this song...
the scratch noises were sweet too, keep it up man
check out some of my stuff too?
hey man thanx! glad you liked =) im hearing that alot.. i need more "diversity", and "complexity" in my songs. hmm. ill see what i can do when i submit newer songs. i promis EVERYONE they'll be more so "diversed" and what not. yeah, sure man. ill check out your songs =)