I don't know how but it seems like you made a song without any rhythm in it. The basses themselves, as well as the beats, are decent but they look much worse without any rhythm to support them. I think you need to go for an angry and fast beat rhythm because you want to dedicate this song to your less than respectful neighbor. I also think, that because you "inspiration" is loud, you should make the rhythm loud too but not so that you cant hear the bass or the beats. I hope you can improve this song and have better luck with your loud a$$ neighbor.
I would call it Grime, not Dubstep; personally I draw my inspiration from more lesser-know artists like Ponicz, Akira, Bukez Finezt, P0gman, Rygby just to name a few. -Grime has a way different feel than Dubstep in general. You should check some of these guys out to grasp where my style is coming from.
weird,good melody,lets co-op