Previous reviewer was right...
The song itself seems rather empty and rushed. The idea of mixing classical and hip-hop was good, but you should elaborate on in a little more. Maybe some strings in the background could fill the emptiness that can be felt. But the composition itself wasn't that bad. Work harder and you'll definatley come to impress.
thanks for the review. i know i definatly need to give my songs a more unique feel and stop making them so simple sounding, but i am a begginner, so there's still loads of space for improvement. The strings for the background are a good idea. maybe i'll try it.
Whoa whoa whoa!
Slow down! You're not getting any better by putting random songs here that only take you an hour at most! Take it easy, and take your time with your songs, and learn to get better. You're only making yourself a worse name by putting stuff up that people wouldn't usually want to listen to.
-Don't use the FL samples, find some that you like, sounds that make the song the way you like
it. Get some plugins too, they help A LOT!
-Just make this your own, not Fruity Loops style. People get bored of that after a while.
-Just keep trying, you'll get there : )
-Check out my muzik!
safe for the advice. having heard your music i see where you're coming from (you've got some complicated tracks man!)i'll try and take my time from now on. By the way "all is finished" and "recovery..." are some beautiful tracks man! I'll keep on trying and one day maybe i'll get up to your level...hopefully! :)