Charming piece of music. Got a very cinematic sensibility. Would benefit from some more clarity in the mix, and a little bit more energy at one or two parts. Composition-wise not much to find fault with, a few production flaws stop it getting another half star from me.
i would have taken out the band intro that you had at 0.07, loving the chime triangle that you picked.
There is a sour note at 0.51-0.52 which is out of place
Loved the duel instrument at 1.23
a un-needed instrument at 1.33 (extra triangle) if you were looking to emphasize an idea that is happening here, increase the volume of one of the instruments a little so that it's audible, make it ... Out of the ordinary it shows a small conflict that is happening which would add on dramatically since you add more instruments very quickly, sorta a sudden event that leads out of control very quickly.
Also loved how you created feat at 1.38 ish, really strong visual!
Also really, really good choice for the climax at 2.20 with the long bell