Any good song tells a story as you listen to it. I think you got that right in this. Has a peaceful and innocent feeling at the beginning then transitions to something more dark. Loving the piano in this. I think though that if you had a lone cello backing the piano in maybe a area that's more of a solo some where within this it would bring out more. Then you can go do what you did at 1:52 with the beautiful choir. I do enjoy the abrupt ending. Almost signifies the end of life in my opinion. It was over.. The story was finished. Anyway great work on this I'm adding it to my fav's.
Thank you for a detailed review. Actually, this piece was composed for a suicide scene. You guessed right. :)
I like how you blended the slow parts with him fast parts in your song, the addition and choice of triangle made a wonderful base line addition
Well done, would be interested to see where you would take this in a re-visit
Thank you. Though I don't quite understand the last sentence about a re-visit. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.