Your baseline is to hard compared to the rest of the song, id tone it down to 80% or lower if you chose to
also it is a very repetitive song after about 20 seconds
i would chop it off at 1.20 and call it "just a little something you worked on for a little bit"
Yea, can feel the lack of a singer in this. The instrumental is awesome though.
The mixing needs work though. The frequencies of the percussion, especially the snare, clashes with the frequencies of most of the synth. I also think that the snare is too loud.
The melodies are really nice. I'll only judge this as an instrumal for a song, so the lack of variety isn't that much of a problem.
Nice, chill track with some interesting melodies going on.
Keep up the good work and I hope you are able to find a singer :D.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.