Awesome and original as always! I do have to agree with DjGubkafish about having buildups that kind of don't lead anywhere. But overall it's still a pretty cool song full of great ideas.
I like the transition from build up to melody . Although you should use different beat for main melody so it doesn't feel like part of build up .
Basically you have 2 build ups but no middle if that makes sense . You could add another pattern .
Some of the VSt choices hurt this song . Its important that lead and background complement each other . Timing on phasers needs to be more accurate.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.