Did it for me.
5'd, fave'd, D/L'd.
A few moments I'd change personally, but I'm pretty content with what you've got here. Great stuff.
It's the first time i make a Trance song i'm relatively 'happy' with, but there's a lot of thing to improve also, so you're probably right with what you think should be changed.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.