Where i think it could be better is the mix and trying to make it less -full-.
It creates a kind of hiss, or blur (of sound). Also the rephrain sounds wrong (with the change in percussion) cause of the hissing.
Everything else is pretty spot on, the echo in the guitar is a nice add.
I do miss the little jazzy piano whirls though.
Yup, I can't diss agree because I was aware of the distortion when I put it on. I have recently gone over this song again, and I've sorted a couple of things out, but it's still too demo sounding to put it on. I will make this song awesome, I love the original. The piano whirls I know. I will do a far more accurate mix in the near future. Thanks for the review.