Well here was a good piece the sound was great and has a real driving force behind it you really pushed the limits of this one and I was really impressed with what you presented us here, as for improving on things Im not sure but you have done pretty well sofar.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think its fine as is.
Now this is metal! Lots of power in this submission, and some good variation as well, though it would probably sound much better with a beat + vocals. keep it up!
this one was a realy good one, so far my favorite of your submissions. like i said before, the clarity thing dosent even bother me. but you have my aim, so if you need any tips to mak it clearer, lemme know, and ill do what i can to help
I didn't really find this piece of music to be that great. It had a lot of static sounds in the background which really made it quite hard to enjoy listening to. Seriously, make this better quality and maybe I can sit through the whole thing.
you tell me how to do that and believe me i will
hrmmm suggestions eh...
I dunno if you use cubase or not - but it's a good program to use - if you want suggestions tho I suggest you ask the people who specialize in this gield over on this side of the audio portal - such as DarKsidE_555 and jarrydyn (altho i think he calls himself captain jarrydn or something pirate like now..) - ppl like that I'm pretty sure can help you - your stuff is good - just the bad equalization is KILLING it..
well im not using cubase is it free??? because i have no money man