I like the ending of the loop, I'm a real sucker for deep tones at the end of bars lol. It's soo pachalbel tho =( Which didn't affect my score cause I can separate preference from this reviewing thing so no worries there.
Nice loop you got here, one thing tho, you might wanna change the genre, this is definitely more Hip Hop. I only say change it cause some people can, do, and WILL 0 bomb you just for genre mislabeling -_-
But if you put it in Hip Hop there's always the chance someone might go "wtf is this shit... this isn't old school or modern... ZERO BOMB!"
=( labels... pft...