Sounds too repetitive...
It sounds alright but you just need to add some new beats to this audio mix, and also you should maybe make the beat sound quicker.( not raggin on ya, just givin you this is just constructive criticism. : )
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Yeah, this was a test trial, I'm probably going to add more drumness to it, maybe speed up the tempo. But thank you very much for your input, it has been taken in deep concideration. I don't know why I'm writing so stiffly. Fuck. There we go.