It sounds awesome, the only thing I would suggest is that from :25 to :50 there seems to be a lack of depth.
I would say :25 to about :30-35 it can stay that way, but maybe build up some kind of bass line to make the sound deeper!
Keep up the good work though
I have a lot to learn about a great deal of things. I don't see it, yet but give it time. Thanks for the feedback.
Wow it sounds really cool, keep up the good work and u will become big someday. And u deffo deserve a place in the Audio Portal so I scouted u for the AP :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.