This isn't a bad submission at all! Nice job!
-The clarity suffers just a little when the synths get slightly distorted after the calm part in the beginning.
-You used some techniques I've heard in some other songs in the beginning.
-After the distortion, it was very pleasant!
-Fun, catchy tune.
-You obviously took some time to make some of this.
Great job, you're on the right track!
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