1:17 to the end sounds amazing and I wish you would go back into the 1:17 melody at 2:33 and add more to the song. I wasn't a fan of the beginning though. I felt it was going in a different direction. I would try to make the two parts mesh a little better and perhaps get to that 1:17 melody a little sooner. That's just my two cents though. Overall I enjoyed the song.