I loved how the beat increases throughout the song! Keep it up dude!
Your pretty good with making melody riffs and counter melodies, as you displayed very well in the beginning part of the song. However, you need to work on mixing up the beat and adding a more fulfilling backround pad or bass behind your song, and don't forget to harmonize it with a melody. The intro is okay, but with that backround, you'll be rolling.
-You're not bad all, just keep digging in and making this a killer tune!
well, u should have finished it dude.
it was pretty good audio, work on yer spelling man.
A good soul song, it started off slow, but grew into a nice steady melody. It sounds good, and for a soul song, I liked it a lot =)
thx i was shooting for that