Very Ominous. I like the ideas you had with this one and the mastering sounds pretty good to me. It felt a little slow however throughout the song. When the drums kicked in I was expecting a more DnB double time feel. Perhaps adding more percussion variation at a double time pace could help the intensity of the song. Also I would recommend adding more ambient sounds to the background to fill in some of the empty space and add to that ominous atmosphere and assist in some of the transitions. Overall, I thought it sounded pretty good and it has a lot of potential.
To be honest I had no idea what I wanted to with this song lol and I do agree with it being slow originally I was going to make this version a dnb song (had gotten started on it and everything) but I wanted to try experiment with some things.
Thank you for the review it was very helpful. :)
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