I really liked this. This was quite interesting. I liked the incorporation of the tech sounds and the rock. It was quite unique. I could totally see this in a video game. However...
- The mix down was decent. Could use some work there. The snare type thing was a little soft.
- Try to use a more variety of instruments. You did have many, but after the "chorus" if you will, I wanted something more. Perhaps a solo guitar or a drum solo or something. Something new and exciting.
Keep up the good work!
Total: 88/100 (NG: 4.5 stars)