One of the first song i learnt on bass and also the first metal song i have ever listened to

practice

you need some practice but it was um not that bad

Better than I could do.

But it's a bit too slow. And vocals are needed.

Nah.....

This was pretty skillfull but I didn't really like this. It was a boring loop that wasn't very clear. It wasn't that original either. But at least I can tell you put a lot of effort into doing this. Your effort saved you so overall 5.