I like it
The vocals could be fine tuned a bit more but I have to say that I really liked what you have presented here with some nice backround sounds, maybe more focus on the vocals next time. other then that it was pretty good.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more focus on the vocals but not by much.
Thanks! Will try to improve next time :)
The song does seem to mesh. Its like vocals and instruments were thrown together. Not bad for your first song.
Our next song will be edited better, I promise :)
Pretty good. Song made really good. But i think there are some things that should be changed for better sound:
The main vocal does not make single construction with the other instruments. It sounds like there is a vocal and some music on the background. It doesn't sound united. To fix it, try to decrease volume of of main vocals and use some equalization and Panning.
And also train your vocals more.
In spite of this, the song is pretty good. Maybe you'll become a rockstar and i will go to you concert, if you make a tour)
Thanks, soon we will release an improved version of the song and I think it's much better :)
I feel you bro!! I always sing about a broken heart :')
Thanks man :) I feel you too!