I took a listen through all your songs, this is my favorite so far. You have some decent stuff here and I am always happy to see more fellow music makers on newgrounds.
I almost disagree with HelpThePoor, I feel like it goes good on its own, there are songs that don't need so much energy and I think you were going for that sort of.
Anyways, Keep up the good work!
I like this song, but it just seems to me like it's missing something to make it a complete song. I would like to have heard a bass line as well as more prominent drums come in to give the song more energy. There are many areas in this song where it feels like it is about to build up to something, but then it never really does. So I give you 3 stars for now because it feels to me like the song is incomplete, but I think you are off to a good start. But then, a lot of my songs on NG are not completely finished either...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.