Good try

Nice track in general, but unfortunately I have less-than-positive feedback.

At first it seemed like a blazing intro to a shattering melody line, but I was slightly disappointed. The dissonant 2nd melody at beginning set somewhat of a negative idea in my head about the rest of the song.

I also feel that following the introduction, your track falls into recurring repetitiveness that I quickly grew tired of (eg. percussion loop, VOX).

I think that your other recent music is slightly more appealing. Despite my ranting, I am actually trying to stay as positive as possible. Hopefully I've helped identify some of the problems from the "listener's point of view".

Keep trying man, some of your other work is great.

nightvision

comet

yo, u make some pretty good d&b, will check and review some more of ur tunes when i get the chance
keep em coming
;ped

Crappy Quality

I'm not sure if it was me, but the sound sounded a little crappy to me. I don't know why it just did. The beat was okay, but didn't really seemed like somebody would add to anything other than like an Ipod or CD if he was into that type of stuff.