Your Mom Sucks.
I mean, come on. That's not terribly original.
Then again, I did laugh because quite frankly, this is impromptu and also meant for cheap laughs.
hahah if that was ment to funny you did you a good job. But if you were trying to be serious... quit while your ahead haha. One of the rhymes "uhmm yeahh..." "tom is my mom who cuts his front lawn" wtf? haha. I like the piano in the background I'll give you that but work on it buddy.