the jazz lead aint very good but the drums r great and where is the drop? but apart from that its fine
I really think that you're on the right track to fuse electronic music with jazz harmonies.. this is definitely a step into the future so way to go.
With the timing changing every quarter measure in every verse, I improv'd the beats. Not the best but I enjoy the ambiguity. Oh this is just the beginning of Jazz/electro/dubstep. Which many of you will most likely hate me. But pioneering via musical genres is an adventure.