I'm not sure if you're trying to make a statement or purposely tried to make this sound bad. Nonetheless, it's not bad. But it's definitely not the best I've heard.
It's a little catchy and intriguing (hate to use the same word, but it's perfect for this song.), but there's nothing really new. It's repetition.
UncleCubone, thanks for listening and chiming in. I'm sorry we don't see eye to eye on this one, though I must disagree with the nothing new part. I hope that you will understand part of my goal in my work to challenge expectations and present something new. Of course, this often brings resistance, and many don't know what to do with something that's very new, but I still do it with a lot of fun and excitement. To give you an example, I make all of the sounds you hear in my music so I can express what I really want. In my view, these sounds are good!
Messy to begin with, but intriguing nonetheless. Picks up after a minute, so it is what it is...
Dear Muvax, thanks for listening and giving me your feedback. I'm not exactly sure what your comment really is, but I definitely would refer you to the response I gave UncleCubone on this track!