No different from part 1
This is pretty much the same as part 1. The same samples/beat/sound bytes... only thing thats different is how they are placed together... and it still sounds just like part 1. If these two are supposed to go together its WAY too long. This one might even peak more than part 1 as well.
It might seem like im being harsh but this does need work. It is a good effort and you do have some skill though. Keep it up.
Oh, and please try to avoid fading songs out... its boring no matter what genre you produce for.