Another very short loop that i didn't have any ideas on how to develope in a full song....
I could offer some ideas....
It started too soon, from a song standpoint, twas fine for a loop. The bass riff you ended the song with might even work as an intro. Just throw some a more basic beat with the strings in first, then elaborate the drums.
What this song needs: DEEP bassy pad, synth line(waspy short synthish, elaborated piano, some spizzazz
Cant help you with that last one....
Thanks for dropping by. Sorry for answering so late, maybe too late. It's been 2 years since i haven't been on newgrounds and i also had to fix/reformat my computer so i lost all my old projects but it doesn't matter. I'm starting again... slowly but still going.
Thanks for the advice and the review.
Neat
Hello General_Leo
You know, i've always wondered what to do with those songs that never ever seem to want to expand, and I know what you're feeling with this piece.
I cannot think of how to expand it myself, but what the hey, lets give it a shot shall we?
Lets talk a bit about mood and atmosphere.
Well it's definatly a energetic piece, and definatly it's got elements of Techno, kinda reminds of a melting Ice temple ;).
It loops damn well though, i'll give it that.
Lets talk a bit about instruments.
Good use of synths, everything flows, rapidly yes, but flows non the less.
Good bass use at the end, makes for a great way to loop.
Lets talk about possibilities.
Well the bass end gives you the chance to go one of two ways. You can either go back to the energetic segment, like you had in the beginning, or you could go quiet, maybe build up on that bass line.
Maybe a build up, and a total change in direction?
It is one of those songs, that have potential, but its so hard to know what to do with it.
Sorry I guess I can't be of much help to you ;).
Well keep the fighting spirit strong, and keep them coming.
Also alot of these tracks are either Trance or Classical or Classical Rock, putting them into Misc, doesn't really get them listened to.
Goodbye General_Leo.
Lol, melting ice temple :D
Yea a build up and then a change of direction would be a good idea but i have no clue at all what to implement and stay on the same track... Maybe at a later time i'll be able to do something with it.
I know that the misc. section is less visited than the other sections but i just don't know exactly where they go. Like i didn't know or i didn't consider any of my pieces "classical rock". I'll try and put my songs into some genres in the futur.
Thanks for the review SoulStrings.
not bad at all
hey man, not bad. this is pretty catchy. i like the bass alot seriously =) i could easily use this in a flash animation (once i become a little better) ill keep this one in mind incase i decide to. i know its a loop and everything, but it would be cool if it was a little longer.. yeah. it's definently good though. hey, if you get the chance check out my remix of "omni world" called "omni world remix" yeah.. it's pretty good
for the most part, keep it up, youve got talent when it comes to makeing music man
Hehe thanks man :D
Well you know when things don't really work out... i really tried to make it longer but it didn't happen. I left the song sleeping for weeks thinking how i could improve it... but then i got some new samples, so i decided that i'd submit this last piece with the old "default FL" samples and that i'd start on something new wich became a song called "Ice Temple".
Wow longest sentece in the world lol.
Anyways... i'd be glad if you use this in a flash animation.
I'll definately check your remix out. And review it too :)
Thanks for the nice comments and reivew!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
LoneEagle 
