You know, i've always wondered what to do with those songs that never ever seem to want to expand, and I know what you're feeling with this piece.
I cannot think of how to expand it myself, but what the hey, lets give it a shot shall we?
Lets talk a bit about mood and atmosphere.
Well it's definatly a energetic piece, and definatly it's got elements of Techno, kinda reminds of a melting Ice temple ;).
It loops damn well though, i'll give it that.
Lets talk a bit about instruments.
Good use of synths, everything flows, rapidly yes, but flows non the less.
Good bass use at the end, makes for a great way to loop.
Lets talk about possibilities.
Well the bass end gives you the chance to go one of two ways. You can either go back to the energetic segment, like you had in the beginning, or you could go quiet, maybe build up on that bass line.
Maybe a build up, and a total change in direction?
It is one of those songs, that have potential, but its so hard to know what to do with it.
Sorry I guess I can't be of much help to you ;).
Well keep the fighting spirit strong, and keep them coming.
Also alot of these tracks are either Trance or Classical or Classical Rock, putting them into Misc, doesn't really get them listened to.