you should start the beginning off harder like with the ending, the beginning SUCKS
hated the beginning.
maybe a little hardstyle to the breakdown in the middle which is just a joy...
As a trance-progressive lover myself i don't mind 5 build ups. Thats how it should be :) you might get some hate for it though
I think this sond needs a better brakedown (clear primary melody) Instead i think you just made a bit of background for your build up if that makes sense .
So without a uniqe melody it dosen't really stand out to me but i have to give you 3.5 for effort .
LIKE ORAL SEX IN MY EARS!
Glad that your ears like it!
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