Unless this involves mantis shrimp, I dunno man...
Dubstep + deep sea animals just isn't really working for me I'm afraid. I might be able to see it, but I just don't know.
My beef is with the repetition. I don't know if I said this to you before, but the foundation of a good arp/ostinato is that it evolves and changes over time, even slightly. One time in four has an anticipation of half a beat or something silly like that can make a big difference. When I write a snare cadence (pattern) for a piece, I have it go ABAC with each letter being a measure and representing a variation. Then that gets varied over a greater scheme. The same can be applied here.
Also, you can have a distinct and unique B section in another key or with a new key structure. That little arp would go away and something new would come in.
Perhaps the biggest thing I have about this track is that Antarctica II is a journey. As you scroll down the image, it evolves, it changes, it becomes wholly new things with each new layer of the ocean with new creatures. I really wanted to see that in your piece, but I just didn't get that vibe at all man, and it's MAKIN' ME MAAAD. D:<
Anyway... the mixing and mastering is pretty good. I might tone down the high wah-wah thing a little bit or pan it or do something so it isn't in my face the whole time. As I know nothing about dubstep bassery, I shall take it that the bass was good as everyone else seemed to think so.
Keep it dubby buddy,
Total: 49/100 (NG: 2.5 stars)
This is a bit better than your first submission.
Feels like it fits the Image of frozen oceans and Antartica.
I do still feel though that it's too repetetive.
The basswork is amazing as well as the mixing.
The high pitch sound that comes in each bar or so is a bit distractingand annoying to listen too.
Not a huge fan of this kind of dubstep, but I feel like it still was pretty good.
An interesting idea that delivers a mildly engaging atmosphere, but ultimately doesn't offer much behind the reverb. While the piece has a solid structure, it seems like it drags the same riff for three minutes. In fact, I would have loved some variation at around 2:30 and it could have been a good chance to enhance and intensify that breakdown, possibly by adding more background ambiances and sounds.
The mastering is quite well performed, though some sounds may be a little too overpowering - namely the screeching sound reminiscent of whale songs - I find the rest to be rather coherent. The bass is probably the highlight of this song and I really enjoy how you automated it, giving it plenty of life and expression.
Thank you for your review :)
Dude, that basswork is fucking dope. Definitely a headbanger. Those synths are sick.
Very nice intro! Reflects the piece well. This is very experimental I can tell, I don't like the really high pitch screech synth in the beginning much as it's done a lot, but I'm really digging everything else and some of the other synths. I feel the bass synths and sub bass overpowers the high synth at one point, but eventually they duck down.
I feel this could use a lot more variation, but it feels well layered. In an interesting way, this reflects the artwork well. Good mixing, just the high lead synth is overpowered. Nice work.
cheers, might play around with that screech.
but thank you for your insight. :)
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