Ok so, I do like the song, at least, it isn't garbage, I like it when I listen to it. But there are some things bothering me. First, the song seems to be a very long intro. I mean, I was so waiting for something to happen, and the only thing that appears is a loud rythm. Fine, alright, I mean, you've putted it in "trance" so I can't be anything else than a soft and travelling song. But even for Trance, a melody's missing. The whole thing sounds like a great background, but I think maybe make some change, this song need to evolve with time, and by evolve I don't mean that it has to just have more sounds added to the first one. What I'm trying to mean is : I don't feel like the song has an end. It feels like the intro is during forever, and then there's a 1 second ending, and it just stops. A song like that has to make the listener travelling. So it needs to make one get higher and higher with the song, and then calm down, to get back on one's feet. Your song need to be like a rollercoaster.
I hope you'll get my point. Apart from this, the fact that the song isn't complete to me. It does sound right. So.. Thank you ^^