This right here, this is what hip hop used to be. The tight lyrics, up-front flow, and the gorgeous sample-based instrumentals. I miss this shit, and am glad to hear people still doing it like this.
This shits dope, no lie. Nice!
Nice. I'm into it.
Lyrics and music aside, what impressed me was your cadence. Paying attention to how you're saying things is just as important (maybe more important) as what you're actually saying. I think this is especially important for rap. I've heard enough amateur stuff where the rapper is just flat and it sounds terrible.
Dude, this is fucking sick.
Hey man; first off- I understand what happened to you in school, man. People are sheisty.
As far as this song goes- good work. I can tell it comes from deep inside you, and the message hits pretty hard. I think your rhymes are good and the beat bumps fine, but it feels rushed near the end. I do the same thing in my own music sometimes. I have to remind myself that a rest is actually a musical device and space between phrases can be alright if done correctly.
But no, for real, if it sounds like how you want it to sound- then it sounds right. Thanks for a quality piece of music, man.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.